Friday 22 April 2011

Q&A: Can you give me some quick suggestions on this mini paragraph-story i wrote?

Can you give me some fast tips on this mini paragraph-story i wrote?
Question by Leah: Can you give me some speedy suggestions on this mini paragraph-story i wrote?
corrections to any grammar errors, or tips to increase the real piece are extremely a lot appreciated:)

... apparently our literature class is intended to submit a piece into some contest, and we have to submit by tomorrow before noon, i was not conscious of this right up until a pal told me on facebook, so i just quickly grabbed a

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