Monday 25 April 2011

Can you give me some quick suggestions on this mini paragraph-story i wrote?

Can you give me some fast suggestions on this mini paragraph-tale i wrote?
Query by Leah: Can you give me some quick tips on this mini paragraph-story i wrote?
corrections to any grammar errors, or tips to increase the true piece are extremely significantly appreciated:)

... apparently our literature class is intended to submit a piece into some contest, and we have to submit by tomorrow prior to noon, i was not conscious of this right up until a buddy told me on facebook, so i just quickly

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