More of my story, please critique and give some suggestions?
Question by ♥: More of my story, please critique and give some suggestions?
The prologue: http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AmoqyiqqLqsPexlzS8UT5EWf5HNG;_ylv=3?qid=20100127210130AApLkDt
Okay. So here's an excerpt from the first chapter. I may cut some out and make it the whole first chapter. BUT please read the prologue first, hopefully it will grasp your attention.
Unless you've been born and raised in the woods,
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