Is this tale properly created?
Question by Mrs. David James Archuleta: Is this tale properly written?
I am fifteen and I am working on a tale. (This is just a draft of the very first part of the story) I was asking yourself if this tale was properly written and if you have any critique..I know it's extended but I genuinely want some answers! Many thanks! :)
Chapter 1
Meg trudged slowly and gradually down the front stairs and dropped her previous bags at her feet that had been filled with
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